What the hell?
I never listen to Trance music and believe me, that is not an understatement but what the hell? How could I have missed a gem like this? I know why, because I never check out the Trance section... Well, you my good sir, have changed my views about Trance music, frikkin unbelievable your stuff really is!
Drums.
I'll give it to you, you have awesome drums and perfect dj scratching but it really needs more. I think a proper bass line will get this loop in the right track. Think about it.
It has a style of it's own.
Whenever I listen to a Hip Hop loop/song, I always consider it as a possible beat I could use for a song of my own; therefore I take it very seriously and actually listen to the song a couple times before making a decision. This had a "very" good beginning. I liked the style of the drums used, my only gripe is that there is nothing more, just drums and that DJ effect. I'll let you in on a secret, I love loops/songs with some awesome bass. No, I am not talking about drum n' bass but a song with some awesome bass always wins in my book. Try that for your next one and keep it up, you have great potential.
???
Am I supposed to be amused? I don't even know what this is supposed to be.
Dance music huh.
I don't listen to nearly as muc hDance music as I would like but this really got my head bumpin'. I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it and it really is a catchy beat. Like you have said in your other songs, as well as your reviews; your stuff is not complex but it has a nice beat to it and it's catchy which is good. Epic is not always the way to go, sometimes, just getting something that gets people to nod their head is good.
Yea I'm pretty happy with the beat too :) heavy kick and a clap and hi hat that mix together pretty well.
I have been looking for something like this!
You have no idea how happy I am right now. I have been looking for some quality hip hop on Newgrounds for such a long time now and you have finally shown me that there is still hope! I love the beat and I absolutely love the lyrics. You are a true lyricist and I applaud your every effort.
Kinda.
I don't listen to much DnB but you have the basics down I would say. The only issue is your samples. I think they need more punch and ooomf. Keep it up and you will be on your way to stardom. Make something that will make my sub woofer SHAKE.
"Make something that will make my sub woofer SHAKE."
I'll get right on that. I'll try to get my bass not to sound like static.
~boney_man
You're finally back you bastard!
You know, just cause you had no internet for over a month doesn't mean you have the right tofall off the face of the earth, you bastard! Anyway, I guess this redeems your short disappearance. I really like this piece and you have once again proven yourself as an adept composer. I am always baffled by your non-punk work. I know you can do other genres but seriously, wow. And you know what? This is great, just in time for the redesign, it should be the theme song for Newgrounds.
Thanks dude, I appreciate your feedback :) Having no internet allowed me to work on this undistracted so it was a good thing I guess haha
peace
I love this track.
I've only listened to three of your songs now but I have to say that this is my favorite track by far so far... I just love the intro! When the song actually starts, it seems a little weak... I think it needs more of a buildup and it needs to be a little louder but I still like the song. The intro made it "great!"
It's Quiet.
I dunno if it's just me but after listening to Attempt at Canon Rock, this song sounds a little quiet. I like it but it just seems to be stuck to one thing, you know? There isn't much diversity. I mean, it's a nice riff but it just remains relatively the same throughout the song. If there were some vocals it would help but overall, it's nice.
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