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[Freak: Episode 2]

A masterpiece!

Wow. This has been in development for such a long time! I remember when you first showed me the concept art and the animation. I thought it was going to be hard and it was! But you managed to achieve this.

The voices are so nicely done it's like in a movie! The characters are diverse and the animation is oh so nice! The music is alright but what I really liked was the look the movie had. It looked professional and well done.

You will never cease to amaze me with your talent. A job well done. Thank you!

Evil-Dog responds:

Thanks bro!

[Brunch Of The Dead Ep.5]

Stay Tuned After The Credits: Hahaha!

20th Century Chicken Telivision. What the hell?! A blowing up rubber ducky? I want one! Here, the blood splatters are so much cooler and the graphics are a definate upgrade from the first episode. The zombies also look at least 3x better!

MXC Replay. What the hell?! It looks like you were really running out of ideas on this episode but I like you not for your animation skills, but for your ideas!

Right Trinity?! Haha. "Knock, knock." "Who's There?" "A pack of zombies..." Hahaha. That is funny. Stupid but funny.

The ending was somewaht confusing but I think I understand. Thank you.

By the way, "The meaning of life is..."

Riotcomix-2006 responds:

Thank you very much for reviewing the entire series. I'm very glad that you gave sometime to type up your thoughts on all of the episodes. Feedback is the most important aspect of me creating these movies. I love reading various viewer's reviews. Thank you once again, and hopefully you'll get to see my newest animation (which will come out later on this year).

[Brunch Of The Dead Ep.4]

Episode Four: Not the same!

Wow! A graphical upgrade! Although still not EXTRAORDINARY, there was a graphical upgrade! I love it! It was funny when he went to look and found the neighbor dead, his spinal chord removed. And what's this? Subtitles? Oh joy! And the sound is even better! This is just SOOOO great!

The zombie who was playing on the gameboy was funny but not that great of a gag. When he started shooting out the window and one of the zombies said "Fuck this." That was really funny because they both started running away, shrieking.

Then the zombies paper-rock-scissor it to decide who has to jump up to the window.

The final scene, him and the rubber ducky is great! Thank you.

Riotcomix-2006 responds:

I'm happy to see that you gave this episode an 8. The others were low 6s and 5s but you seemed to really enjoy them. I like when hard markers give high marks, it really proves that I've accomplished something. Thank you :)

[Brunch Of The Dead Ep.3]

Nutsack, I Don't Take Crap: Even better!

"I like my coffee like I like men... black... cirumcised." Hahaha! Funny!

The reference to his lost hand was REALLY well done and humorous. I didn't think you were going to do it but you did and I loved it. The irony of it was how he didn't lose it juggling chainsaws but instead, by a black man's gun. Great stuff!

The way you use camera angles is just so brilliant. Just like in a movie! The woman dating the zombie was unnecessary but the image where they were eating a man's hand was just so funny I accepted it! Then, she went "Da da da da dada!" And she kicked him in the nuts. Bad move. She lost at least fifteen gallons of blood. Hahaha!

This episode was not as great as the others but still enjoyable. Thank you.

Riotcomix-2006 responds:

Thank you :)

[Brunch Of The Dead Ep.2]

What Comes Up, Must Be Put Down: Mesmerizing.

Nice use of camera angles and nice implementation of suspense. The begininning with random objects coming out his shirt sleeve was weird at first but then started making sense when the zombie appeared out of nowhere at the window sill. It started getting funny when he couldn't get the correct object out of his sleeve.

The blood splatter reminded me of those zombie movies (once again, meaning you did an excellent job!) when there would be a ridiculous amount of blood. The sound is FAR from perfect and the echo effect does get annoying.

It was hilarious when he was thinking to himself and then, he started screaming like a girl when he ran outside. Zombie on top of the truck, classic! When he used the fork, I was surprised at how funny that actually was.

Then there came the scene with zombies carrying and doing various things... Funny. The one with a bird on its head. The other carrying a wounded one. Comedic.

The ending, involving the hands coming out of the door was great and the scream was a nice touch. Thank you for the entertainment.

Riotcomix-2006 responds:

I'm happy to hear you really liked it. Thank you.

[Brunch Of The Dead Ep.1]

The Calm Before: Top Notch!

The beginning with the truck hitting some spikes and spewing toxic waste all over the cemetery is brilliantly done. Although not exceptional in the graphics department, it's all good. I also like how you presented the credits on tombstones... Very clever. This is just like in a movie you'd see on TV. The hand coming out of the ground was also great. I love the way you used black and white to liven up the atomosphere.

This reminds me so much of the B-type Zombie Movies I would watch as a kid. The music is also nice and cheesy. Just right for this movie.

The scene with the couple is a classic. Just like in most zombie movies, there is always some romance involved. "Cacamooga." It's hilarious how the woman drinks the ring.

Now, the bar scene was all good BUT, the only inconvenience was the woman's voice. It sounded like a man! Probably because it was. Haha. Just adds to the humor factor. You should have added subtitles or an option to toggle them on or off.

I also liked how each scene was introduced with a TEXT screen. Kind of like in the "Kill Bill" series. The reference to "Tool Time" was unexpected and weird.

This episode was slow but still enjoyable. No actual action but a nice introduction to the whole series. I really like your style. Thank you.

Riotcomix-2006 responds:

Thank you very much for the well thought long review. I love reading long reviews, it shows that that particular viewer paid attention and seemed to enjoy it more.
The girl's voice is purposely mean't to sound more manly than the actual male character. The girl's name is Girlman, lol.

[Story Tag 2b: Blown Away]

Awesome!

Hahaha! I thought this day would never come. You did an awesome job animating this Dustin! I mean, it looks better and sounds better than the previous episode. The story is well done and humorous and the chracters are well thought out. Although I did not particularily like the voice for the purple minion, it's all still good.

The beginning was nice and the original soundtrack made by you added an AMAZING touch to this piece. It made it feel like one of those Saturday morning cartoons! I loved the abstract look in that HUGE room with the window and the throne.

The fight scene was well done, although not too special. The ending was interesting and I thank you for this. Well done!

[Hyperboy: Episode 2]

A well-deserved 9!

This is some really funny stuff. But first, let me congratulate you on the animation.

It is smooth and there is no "bad-motion-tweening." Some very complementary stuff. The style is present and the presentation is priceless. I love the reference to Dragon Ball Z and the character representations "a-la-Kill Bill" with the music and all. It is really funny, and I love how he kicks jocks in the balls.

At first, upon viewing this, I thought it was going to be boring and dull. After further watching, I found out I was totally wrong. This is really special and well-done. Thank you.

This has everything all the other animations are afraid to talk about!

[Moose Jam #5]

Surprising

Hmmm. It's good to see that you are still keeping up with the Moose Jam series Steven. Good deal. You have quite the lineup for this episode. Pako, Luis, Boxkitten, etc. Nice job. Once again, as I have said before, the menu is not the best and it could have been a whole lot better. It's jus ta little too bland and the way it's made is just too simple. I also did not like how certain parts of the movie contained "random" lines and animation. It is way too clichéd. Nothing too interesting or stunning but still a good animation nonetheless. Good job.

[Short FBF Collab]

Good job.

Even though this is not top notch, it is still enjoyable and I like that. It's good to have something different from all the usual crap we get each day on the Portal. I like the intricate design used for the menu but I don't like how at the end of each short clip, it goes back to the "Play" scene, you should correct that. Now...

Aerdail
I liked your animation but you could have used better music since it was only ten seconds long. A lot of stuff was happening all around and I liked the little count down feature at the top left corner of the screen.

RazorJam
Definately not the best. There was room for A LOT of improvement. I am tired of seeing these random lines in FBF movies. People should refrain from using those and instead, produce some quality work. I am disappointed.

RyuAnimation
Very Cartoonish and, weirdly enough, I enjoyed the first short animation better than the second with the little blue boy in the water. Not much to say about it though. Nice effort.

LegendaryX
Hmmm. Let's see, sketchy FBF and way too short. If you pay close attention, it's only about eight seconds long, you got lazy at the end. Oh well. Good art and good thing you finished. :)

NuiStyles
If I had to pick a favorite, it would have to be this one because of the nice background and fluid animation. Different from all the others and nicely executed. This was the only one with an original soundtrack, if my memory serves me right. I also liked the camera effect and the little countdown feature at the bottom right of the screen.

Overall
Goood job to all but there were a few of you that could have done WAY better. Until next time... Thank you for the short pleasure and keep on animating!